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too much work piled up like flat stones on hot sand sun beats down I cannot afford to add one more stone May 11, 2020 (visual number 2) for nette onclaud's Flow With The Collum Lune Poetry Contest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/15/2020 6:31:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your comments. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 3:02:00 PM

Too much on our plates well expressed my friend. Life can get overwhelming like a game of pickup sticks! Well said! Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/14/2020 7:17:00 AM

The only one I have read that wasn’t the piano. Well done and congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2020 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/13/2020 6:50:00 PM

Congrats Andrea on a lovely take on pile of stones. Mohan

David Mohn

Date: 5/13/2020 6:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Andrea...we were among the few to pick the stones image.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2020 1:16:00 PM

The last straw that breaks the camel's back...the cumulative effect of too much work! Artfully written Lune, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

John Watt

Date: 5/13/2020 1:12:00 PM

Nicely done Andrea - congratulations on your podium win!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/13/2020 12:10:00 PM

I love the way you represented the weariness of adding onto the pile of thoughts using stones. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/12/2020 2:17:00 PM

Hot stuff, isn't it? Aloha! Rico

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/12/2020 12:53:00 PM

I can almost see myself, tongue stuck out, putting on that last tiny little piece... enjoyed your take on it. As a side note .... I entered this lune contest, but for the life of me I can't recall how to add pictures to my text. Hmmm..

John Watt
Date: 5/13/2020 1:11:00 PM

Timothy, I sent you a soup mail about copying images. Andrea taught it to me! ~ John

John Watt

Date: 5/12/2020 10:53:00 AM

ooh, I feel the frustration in this one! Nice one - good luck in the contest

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/12/2020 2:57:00 PM

when I told you my head was spinning yesterday, I was just using an expression to show this feeling of being so frustrated!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2020 7:58:00 AM

go on I dare you !!:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/12/2020 7:30:00 AM

Flat stones on hot sand--I like the way associated them with too much work--and the ending lines speaks well to capture the photo. All the best, Andrea.

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/12/2020 6:05:00 AM

Great work Andrea!!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/12/2020 4:01:00 AM

Wonderful way your thoughts are wandering..Beautifully expressed..Good luck Andrea..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2020 11:31:00 PM

You did a wonderful job with visual two! Love it!