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Lune - Note

Lune - Note one note missing harmony refrains to be resolved staggers in echoes reverberating regret resounds in cacophony’s heavy metal discord life’s melody limping Contest: Flow with the Collum Lune Nette Onclaud Visual #1 5-11-20

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/15/2020 6:21:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Thanks so much for your comments. I appreciate them, as I do admire your poetic style.

L. J. Carber

Date: 5/14/2020 10:02:00 AM

Congrats Sam-- has that haiku feel I love!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2020 2:22:00 PM

This was fun, LJ. Thank you for the "congrats!" Love the adaptation of the haiku form - message in a few words with a punchline! Nice change of pace. Be blessed my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/14/2020 7:13:00 AM

I like how you approached this piece. You struck the perfect tone.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2020 11:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Richard. It just seemed to me that we need all the notes to create harmony both in music and in life. Here's to harmony!

John Watt

Date: 5/13/2020 1:46:00 PM

Ooh, I really liked "reverberating regret resounds", and all your great musical references: harmony, melody, echoes, cacophony. What else would I expect from a pianist/poet? Beautifully done, Sam - a winner for me ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2020 2:01:00 PM

The temptation was just too great for a musician - had to swing at that pitch! Thank you dear friend. Was fun to run the base paths with this one! Always fun to work with a new poetic form. Blessed dear friend!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/13/2020 12:16:00 PM

This is chaotic yet beautiful. Congratulations! :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/14/2020 1:58:00 PM

Hi Aditi, if I haven't welcomed you to the soup before - welcome! Thank you for your visit and your delightful feedback. Sometimes when the music of life is missing a note, there is a frantic quality - it does get chaotic. Thank you for your congratulations!

Silent One

Date: 5/12/2020 11:28:00 AM

A melancholic take on the contest...

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/13/2020 4:17:00 PM

A missing note - a lost chord. The visual reminded me that all the keys and notes are necessary to give music life! Thank you so much for your visit.