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it often feels as though life gathers stones upon puerile sand rising toward hubris ever further from the source …fragile as innocence 11 May 2020 Contest: Flow With The Collum Lune Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Visual: 2

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Date: 5/24/2020 7:27:00 AM
Love the last line...congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/14/2020 2:37:00 PM
David, congratulations to you on your top placement in Nette's contest. Outstanding line, your conclusion, "fragile as innocence."
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Date: 5/14/2020 8:11:00 AM
But mostly we skip this flat ones across the smooth surface of life's pond. Great take on the stones David
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Date: 5/13/2020 11:03:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win in Nette's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/13/2020 8:14:00 PM
Love this and especially when I remember the visual! Cool! Congratulations on first place, David!
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations David...some great lines and a well deserved win in Nette’s contest.nSuZ
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Date: 5/13/2020 6:38:00 PM
David, wonderful description of life..fragile as innocence. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 5/13/2020 1:18:00 PM
This is a beautiful, creative take on the visual you chose, David! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/13/2020 12:03:00 PM
Such a simple smooth flow of emotions :) Congratulations on your deserving win!
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Date: 5/12/2020 3:59:00 AM
Like your interpretation of the stones David, the first one I've seen with visual 2. Good luck Tom
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