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Lunch Box-Hc

Three pancakes mom gave One I save ... your lunch box fell Two fills my stomach 01/03/2019 A childhood incident ,when my friend was hungry in the lunch break.

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2019 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations on a great Haiku , Purbasha, :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2019 4:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win :) -

Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/7/2019 4:36:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2019 3:17:00 PM

Congrats for your win. Too bad you did not add the last two lines!

Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/6/2019 6:50:00 PM

Thank you!

Charles Messina

Date: 3/6/2019 1:34:00 PM

Purbasha, You needed to add another line in the couplet so I had to place you at the bottom and it needed to rhyme with the first line. However it is a lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie

Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/6/2019 6:50:00 PM

I admit,I didn't understand the rules well.Yet thank you Sir for the placement.

Charles Messina

Date: 3/6/2019 1:34:00 PM