Ludix-Rym

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Spring starts the year with soft flowers Sometimes brought with gentle showers Air fragrant with scents that devours Hues so bright and bold that glowers Green grass which also empowers Rabbits hide in brush and cowers Blue skies show their calming powers Buds seem to open through the hours Winter waves goodbye through scourers Spring’s beautiful tales are all ours ~ Summer opens with stunned fervor Welcome sun rays that do nurture Beach trips that add life preserver Roses in much shades add favor Small cookouts bring the server Birds fly past to gently murmur Kids buy cones in every flavor Trimming hedges seems so clever Lawns are mown for the observer Summer’s joy, the perfect merger ~ Autumn creates a sense of peace With leaves falling softly to cease Limbs stark and naked to decease Mums create a vivid showpiece Lakes say sad goodbyes to the geese The crunch of the leaves does increase Bouncing in raked leaves is caprice Some take nature walks without fleece These cheerful blushes are so nice Autumn’s certainly God’s showpiece ~ Winter brings in the harsh weather As the birds may lose a feather Horses bridled with smooth leather Gigs throw snow round altogether Some ride sleds that they will tether Cardinals trust the snow measure Many love snow days much better It seems nice to wear a sweater Ice hangs down from eaves together Winter’s blessings are a treasure ~ Spring’s forests fill with wildflowers A time that brings no wallflowers Summer’s sunshine is a searcher Some days bring about a scorcher Autumn brings about a new lease For a season shared with a niece Winter’s clear skies last forever Reminding us to take shelter God’s paintbrush portrays the seasons Showing us He has His reasons October 7, 2019 LUDix-Rym Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2019 8:48:00 AM

WoW! Regina, You did a great job with the contest theme. I enjoyed how you described each season. It was a pleasure to read you this morning. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2019 8:35:00 AM

A lovely romp through the seasons, Regina! Congratulations and blessings to you, dear one!

Lu Loo

Date: 11/8/2019 4:42:00 AM

woohoo! sweet RR, you are truly such a gifted writer. Beyond words; I can't express....Rhythm, rhyme and 8 syllable count. Amazing all around- thank you for trying this form, it paid off greatly! Awesome job :) CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR PLACEMENT AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST. x:)-luloo

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/12/2019 9:56:00 AM

Fabulous! You’ve definitely painted a beautiful picture of all the seasons for us :-) x

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/8/2019 8:23:00 PM

WoW! amazing tapestry Regina...a sure winner my friend...^WW^ :o)

Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/9/2019 12:10:00 AM

Thanks so much. I appreciate your kind words. Bless you always. Gina