Life Within

once held life within left broken upon the sand forsaken seashell

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Heidi Sands

Date: 10/23/2021 10:02:00 AM

Perfect visual Sandy! Great one :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/23/2021 12:31:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Always appreciated.

Poet Tellaferro

Date: 10/22/2021 12:53:00 PM

a little says a lot... love it

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/23/2021 8:39:00 AM

Thank you, Jehiel for you kind comment.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2021 8:20:00 PM

Oh, Sandra, such wistful beauty spills beyond the confines of your haiku. Your poem enchants and stirs my heart's imagination. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/23/2021 8:39:00 AM

Susan, thank you so much for your lovely comment. It is a gift when a poem that you have written touches a heart.