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My dad liked to fish when he was off long enough and always brought back a couple of fish to give to Smokey. Smokey felt it was his due and intended to have it. Sometimes if you weren't careful our fridge didn't close all the way. Smokey was able to get inside for his treat. Imagine his surprise to find it still fighting.

Life with Smokey was never dull. He was fun and adventure, It never lulled. So quiet and regal he seemed to be, So dignified, That you couldn't see, The rascal there in the heart of that cat. He seemed so gentle, Who'd have guessed that, He was king of the thieves with fresh seafood around; A varlet, a knave, His vices abound. He climbed in the fridge for the fresh crab meat there; And when one fell out, It gave him a scare, For it still was alive and it scurried away, With Smokey behind it, "Oh good! Now we'll play." "I'll swat it about until it just dies." But the crab grabbed his paw, And we ran to his cries. Dad grabbed up the crab and put it right back. Then gave him a fish, He'd remembered to pack, So Smokey could have his treat as before. Not caught this time, But bought at the store.

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Date: 3/28/2021 5:10:00 PM
Hello Judy ... animals and birds can be real smart when it comes to finding a way to indulge in their favourite food - thank you Judy - Lindsay
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thanks bunches Lindsay. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/28/2021 6:21:00 AM
I enjoyed this today Judy. Well written :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2021 7:13:00 AM
Thanks bunches Heidi. God bless, JB
Date: 3/28/2021 3:47:00 AM
The way you first described Smokey pulling food out of the fridge, I thought it was a dog. How funny that a cat can do this! I would not like to have been around when he was chasing the crab. It sounds like you had a lot of fun at your house! My cats used to love the fish I caught and cooked, but they never went after one that was still wriggling. What a fun poem!! Hugs, Carolyn (Smokey gets a fave)
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Carolyn. There will just never be another Smokey. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/28/2021 3:16:00 AM
From the store, he'd never know the difference lol. Tom
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2021 7:20:00 AM
Right you are. He just loved his fresh fish. And this one didn't have any bones to deal with. Thanks bunches Tom. God Bless, JB

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