Joyful Rendering

red roses in bloom
beneath my lover's window
pruned to perfection


Cynthia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/17/2012 8:34:00 AM
Stunning lines. The power of the windows...
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Date: 10/16/2012 5:54:00 PM
Smooth and sensuous rounded vowels...and suggestive rose attars to complete the setting...good work.
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