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4th September 2023
It Happened on a Rainy Night - Collaboration Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Charles Messina 

9th Place

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Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Together they braved the soaking rains For they were lost in lover’s lanes They could not bear to say goodbyes Lost in the storm of lover’s eyes
Collaboration with Charles Messina

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Date: 9/11/2023 8:47:00 PM
So romantic, Andy. I enjoyed this
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Andy Chunn
Date: 9/14/2023 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.....have a safe trip!
Date: 9/10/2023 2:33:00 AM
Very romantic Andy, once long ago me and mine were caught in a storm, when we were young and love was born. Congratulations on your win in Charles collaboration contest… Belle
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Andy Chunn
Date: 9/14/2023 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Belle....your comments are most appreciated!
Date: 9/8/2023 5:52:00 PM
Dear Andy, your romantic imagery captures the passion of sweethearts "Lost in the storm of lover’s eyes". Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/9/2023 11:57:00 AM
Awww that’s beautiful!
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Andy Chunn
Date: 9/9/2023 11:09:00 AM
In another life....many, many years ago....I was lost in the storm....just like everyone else. I'm still married to that wonderful stormchaser. Thank for reading and commenting on our poem.
Date: 9/8/2023 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andy. There is such tender emotion of longing in your collaboration. Blessings.
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Andy Chunn
Date: 9/9/2023 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Sam....I appreciated your taking time to read our poem. Best wishes!

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