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In a Barrel

The Poconos was not the premiere honeymoon spot. The delivery, not far from the rushing rainbow knot. Not anywhere, near my entrance, when love calls. I might have gushed out, in a barrel, over the falls. Could I navigate the canal, the Erie? Where do I land? Amidst the history of bible hacks and medicine - withstand, as generations were preyed upon? But I was baptized through the chute of my mother’s fruit. Was not capsized, as I went down the proverbial waterfall…there was Mercy, the name of the hospital. So, close to the suburbs, (gramercy!) I was born, but did not dwell long in the Goo Goo Dolls space, often would visit my grandparents, an army of relatives showcase. I landed in the Hudson Valley, removed from Niagara Falls at only one year old. Still, all the reverie of Buffalo calls and I’ve answered many a vacation, funeral, wedding invitation, thus the compass of my heart’s heading.
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Roper Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Delaney Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 1:27 PM
I am certain we bond with our childhood landscapes just as well as any native tribe. Kim: Niagara such a powerful and awesome natural wonder. Loved this one. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, SuZ!
Lindley Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 6:33 AM
When my daughter was born I was on cloud 99! A great creation my friend. Our children are our true treasure. God bless. faving this one too.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 12:52 PM
You are awesome! Thank you, dear one!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:09 PM
The birth of a child should always fill me with awe. I remember when my daughter Sandra was born. As she grew up she had to face life. I helped but she had to learn to fend for herself, as you also did. A lovely metaphoric poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 5:43 AM
I know what you mean. It is both difficult and grand to see your child grow up. We suffer when they suffer and rejoice at their success! Thank you, my friend!
Hind Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Intriguing... I sense some whimsical feel to this though, some pain through the eyes of that child. I liked this simple piece.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Perhaps sadness at the passing of time and the loss of many loved ones. Thanks, Paige!
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