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I'M Thinking Naga-Uta Lyric Form

with muse in my hand
and wire tapping on brain
I begin journey
to explore imagination 
to find a story
for sheer enjoyment
when bounty is truely found
on that given day I sought







Entry For 
Brian Strand's 
Five-Seven 
Lyric Contest

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 8/28/2008 9:52:00 PM

Great job! This sounds like a winner to me. I like the flow of the words and the message. ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/28/2008 6:17:00 PM

Wow. Great job. This form seems difficult to me yet you make it look effortless! Nice going! Good luck Kathy! Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/28/2008 8:34:00 AM

I think this entry will fare well as it appears to be in great form and conveys the sentiment of the piece with clarity and a good use of imagery. Well done! Michael