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Ill-Fated Juliet

Shattered glass, piercing heart. The unborn clock advances to despair. A hundred shards cast Romeo into view. Disgusted and dispatched for heavy hearts encounter. Her forsaken sentiments forever Present.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/22/2017 1:31:00 AM
Oh, I love it even more now :) It looks great this way.
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Date: 6/20/2017 12:36:00 AM
This is Free Verse. And I LOVE it. It is beautifully written. It would be even stronger (just my personal opinion), if you would shape it into short lines. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Chantelle Serrano
Date: 6/21/2017 8:46:00 PM
Thank you and thank you for the advice and help. Just starting to write I need all the that I need.:)

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