I Spit Fire

In my mind there is a poetic spark
Illuminating words that were in the dark

When I put pen to paper it starts to blaze
My syllables are on fire as I kindle my phrase

Fiery words race through my mind
As  conflagration  of thoughts  combine

A liquid thought attempts to put out the fire
But it's too weak to extinguish my burning desire

Then like a volcano my stanza erupts
My words are red hot  please don't interrupt

I'm in rhyme mode and I cant stop
 A free verser   intrudes  but is quickly burnt up

My final  couplet flows with the lava down to the sea
Smoke rises from my pen, my poem set free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/27/2016 11:13:00 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2016 2:27:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in the contest! I know this feeling very well! Nicely done. Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2016 1:06:00 PM
great fiery write Jospeh congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:09:00 AM
Joseph, wonderful imagery and congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest...:)-luloo
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Joseph May
Date: 4/15/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Laura
Date: 8/29/2014 6:50:00 AM
Very powerful write, Joseph. congrats
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:29:00 AM
Joseph, Congratulation, on your awesome win. Thanks for the support. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/30/2013 7:55:00 AM
hi Joseph a great pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:16:00 AM
I really liked this one..It reads like a winner to me..I am glad that you spit fire upon this page..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:00:00 PM
that was funny how you burned off the free verser. But I bet you can do great free verse if you set your mind to it!! Good interpretation of the contest challenge.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/13/2013 7:22:00 AM
thank you Andrea....I wrote a free verse for your contest...I think it was one of my better ones...
Date: 11/9/2013 9:32:00 AM
I enjoyed your fiery write. Love the rhymes!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2013 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 11/9/2013 8:13:00 AM
keep on spitting fire! i enjoyed this one...
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2013 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 11/8/2013 10:03:00 PM
Very nice take up on theme of the contest, Joseph
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2013 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram
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