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I Did It For Love

I grew up proud to be grandma’s favorite. Some little rules were broken, I must admit. These were all but childhood caprices. At youth, my ego was broken to pieces. When flatly was I refused love marriage. Settled was I to be with one double my age. No place was there for protest or discussion. A puppet was I dancing in a procession. My lover desperate, gave me his last word. A step by me has to be taken, all I heard, To wipe all the drama, if I wish, like a broom. Faced boldly then did I, my to be groom. In one deep breath I poured my heart out. His face paled, looking almost knocked out. I stood firm and mutinous, ready to retaliate. With a force in me none could annihilate. In dignity, my engagement came to end. Lost prestige and shattered ego, hard to mend. Slyly, Grandma put a word looking for time right. There was only one way to escape this plight. I was called before all to express my wish. Cost me a lot to convince I was not selfish. A simple wedding I was allowed, in a fortnight. But happiness was mine on my wedding night.
27/07/16 Contest: The rule was begging to be broken (A fortnight - 2 weeks time) Win 2nd place

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Date: 8/16/2016 8:26:00 AM
Congrats Sunita, for your well, deserved top placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/16/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for the so very nice words and for going through my poem Teddy. Regd Sunita :)
Date: 8/13/2016 9:52:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Great win.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/13/2016 9:58:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your nice comment. :) Sunita
Date: 8/13/2016 1:33:00 AM
Yayyyy, so glad you are on the winners' list. Congrats for your win.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/13/2016 9:57:00 AM
:D Thanks dear friend for your encouraging words. Love Sunita
Date: 8/12/2016 11:06:00 AM
Very well done Sunita, congratulations on your win and your happiness...
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/12/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Charlie for the kind words...:) Sunita
Date: 8/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
Loved the poem Sunita,congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely words. Love Sunita :)
Date: 8/6/2016 11:29:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for reading and for the lovely comment. :D Sunita
Date: 7/29/2016 11:53:00 PM
l like the way this poem turned out. It gives a message of hope for way out. There are so many situations in life where courage is sorely needed to set life on a different course. This is a poem that you should be proud of as it's impact on others could be huge in the right way. Just knowing for the first time there is choice must be something for those who believed they had none. Fondest regards David
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Date: 7/30/2016 6:18:00 AM
Ya, you're right...its now or never in many situation, whatever be the consequence, you have the satisfaction that at a particular moment you made it and is proud of it and this is what consolidate your self confidence. Thanks for your lovely comment David, I', glad you see it like this. Regards Sunita.
Date: 7/28/2016 8:11:00 PM
see my suggestion in soupmail.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/12/2016 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, for your valuable comments and suggestions. I'm so happy it got on the winner list.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/29/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thanks for your suggestions Andrea, I'm really grateful to you and for your valuable time you've offered in discussion. Hope it sounds better. Love Sunita. (Replied mail)
Date: 7/28/2016 1:54:00 AM
Sunita, I really like this. Please let me know, when you say you were married after all (a trivial matter) what does that mean? I hope you married for love?
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/28/2016 12:36:00 PM
I made a little change, I do hope it is clear. Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/28/2016 12:12:00 PM
Hmmm, I think I remove couple of lines to respect the limit, I tried to constrict what I said. A trivial matter was the wedding as there was no happiness in the family. Check mail. Thanks for going through it, Your suggestion is most welcome. Sunita :)

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