Hooves

hooves beating on the pavement- drums

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/8/2021 7:33:00 AM

Wow, this is so cool, ML *Pangie*

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/12/2021 3:13:00 PM

Thank you.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/22/2021 6:52:00 AM

I heard the hooves! Good Job, ML

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 5:34:00 AM

Exactly write! and in am mere six words! Bravo for this one!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/12/2021 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2021 6:04:00 PM

Yes! Tara tara tarun, tara tara tarun... Love it, M.L. Keep banging the drum for us, please. Smiles, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2021 12:40:00 PM

short and very descriptive ML:-) xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/19/2021 11:45:00 AM

Hello L,M. Kiser, the hooves have a musical sound. Enjoy your day my friend.