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I wish to view an Oct sunrise in my hometown. Riding a train to class and eating bread brown. I miss wearing boots in my charming homeland. Jackets and hats close to the September end. Home ought to be recalled with love and pride. Akin street tag and rendezvous by the creekside. My hometown has bleak fame for being notorious. Despite adversity, the town remains victorious. I used to opine life was only in this town. It had whatever I wanted, so I didn't frown. Driving around town and browsing the shops. I believe it wouldn't pass higher than these flops. On our reunion day, happiness was in the air. The moonlit the path with a clear peep stare. I chose to put a down payment on a house. Since I've broken all its walls, as a little mouse. Fulfilling the wishes of the wealthy with trust And solving the plight of those in need is a must. Embracing all guests, even if they show hesitance I would be halcyon to call this town my residence. No city can ever be completely tamed. Heavy fog soothed scars that were pride-inflamed. With an elfin town road lightings warm glow. What city has such dazzling neon flow? Clearing the dust and recalling the memory. How lucky we are to live in this pedigree. One way to relax and forget the planet Is in embracing your hometown gamut. Every page of life is ripped out as a book. Life doesn't repeat, so cherish each brook. You will thank yourself later for your sacrifice. Strive at sprinting to meet your own suffice! As I drive across town, I notice it is shrinking. I imagine seeing most with others, I'm thinking. The grass may not be as green as it once got But those souvenirs were the best; I never forgot.
Written: May 18, 2023 If Your Birthplace-Country Was A Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 7/9/2023 8:15:00 PM
Great feel in this poem, my friend. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/9/2023 11:35:00 AM
A beautiful description of your wonderful home town my friend. Congratulations on your win in the competition.
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