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Holding Grief

Even though it's time to rest, I feel a weight upon my Chest. One more excuse but just until, I fall asleep against my will. Slowly I begin to dream, Silently I shout and scream. Terrified, but unsure why, Motionless, I start to cry. Feeling completely under duress, Falling apart, becoming a mess. Earnestly feeling I've done nothing wrong, Determined to stand tall, be strong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
nice win Jamie, congrats......... SKAT
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Date: 10/3/2013 8:32:00 AM
congrats on your win! holding on to tightly certainly can cause some grief! great read!
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:19:00 AM
nice write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:35:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Jamie
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:27:00 AM
Thankfully it is only a dream. An emotional write. Well done. Robert(RabCD)
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Date: 10/1/2013 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 9/20/2013 1:14:00 PM
A very well written poem. Perfect, Best wishes Linda x
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