High Tide

Tide's turned… The deluge

   of water comes crashing in

      ~ My heart's stopped out there

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Date: 12/10/2019 11:23:00 PM
I love this one, Gershon. It has great imagery and drama! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/11/2019 1:04:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for letting me know your reaction, Evelyn. Wasn't sure that the drama came across in this haiku. Seasons best, Gershon
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