Heavy Is His Breathing

heaving, heaving of the owl heavy is his breathing the weight of it is leaning upon the reddened rail his eyes glimmering gold opening wide can see inside your soul so close, so warm so cold he’s stealing your breath its freezing in midair the owl can’t help but be aware of your awful stare the figurine faulting ferociously frightened hair stands up on your alabaster skin feathers wrap ‘round the porch climber the climax shivering eyes still staring staring you down daring you to look away with that awful flapping that territorial crapping and beak ringing buzzing your bell your hands now clasp your ears - the silencer of fears you close your eyes disguise the shadows of the night they open all’s clear nothing to fear but the railings painted white the awakening is bright sinister in the moonlight step out at your peril pray for reprieve are all exits marked doesn’t matter… the pulchritude of a speckled coat in mid flight breaks the splattered glass
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Hind Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Gorgeous writing! Enthralling poem!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Glad you liked it, Paige! :)
Pandit Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:39 AM
Your story brings forth the scene through splendid images, Kim. I see the owl staring as if planning its next move.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Thank you! Glad you liked!
Horn Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Glad to see you again commenting on someone else's poem. Owls have always been night animals to me. You can continue reading my poems if and when you want to.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:31 AM
I will James. :)
Horn Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:24 AM
And her's before being killed by a bear with cubs. Mother instinct can be harsh at times.
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 8:03 PM
This is a true horror story, much better than 'Halloween fare,' methinks. Hitchock is interested in signing you...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:29 AM
LOL…inspired by an owl that was staring at my husband when he passed by our front door. So glD you like it.
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