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Heaven, Hell Or Freewill

you kneel in church 
unknowingly worshiping the beast
you kneel to the devil
knowingly worshiping the snake
hears the kicker
your acts mean nothing
for you a dog 
and you choose god
for you walk the earth
and you always will

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/5/2010 10:05:00 AM

Dear John, Whether we believe in God or whatever, we had better believe that we will not always be here on earth! When this shell dies, the spirit may roam here for a while, but even then, it's not going to be forever. Peace, Audrey

Anthony Nutter

Date: 2/5/2010 3:09:00 AM

Scary, sad write in a way. I enjoyed the read, if you do not serve one master you must serve the other. Is there nothing more than here and now, death the end? Keep writing the dark stuff I enjoy the dark side.