Hangover

Flamin’ hangover ... I’m told. “Get outside!” 
“Get out of bed!” Hell, I’m old enough to have more sense  
spending half my day behind me shed, 
cursing that lesson never learnt from past experience.

My gut; my poor guts ...
Churning up - if only I had stuck to what I always said.
I now know what goes on inside a volcano before it erupts.
I should have stuck to light; I’d be all right, but no instead ...
“Here, try this wine.” That flamin’ wine!
That curse that hits me like a bomb -
I’d drank half a bottle and I felt fine,
then bang - the nights all over and I’m gone.

My head, my pounding head ...
why didn’t I listen to the promise that I said?
‘Drink slow and easy; always eat - keep myself in control.’
How did I get my wires crossed ending up brain dead?
I’m getting no relief even with the panadol.
I keep thinking back to last night; how my pouring was so nimble.
Now I’m quivering; my mouths so dry - my foreheads tight and puckered.
Yeah last night; I felt like I was drinking from a thimble.
Today it feels more like a bucket.

Crook - gee I feel crook ...
Those unsympathisers at the house – ‘do you want to drink the dregs?
Have something to eat; that’ll get you going.
We’re cooking greasy bacon to have with runny eggs.’
The thought travelled through my mind; I’m ruddy close to throwing.

My ‘Adams Apple’s’ like a yo-yo, up and down I feel it go
as I attempt to drive their comments from my head.
Still, I’m hanging on like grim death; I find it hard to swallow
as the tastes from last night linger with the thoughts of what they said.

Flamin’ hangover. ..
I’m too bloody old to put up with this self-affliction now.
There’s no sign of recovery; my head, my guts - uncertainty and pain.
When I finally do get over this, I’ll make a solemn vow ...
I’m never, ever, ever, ever - going to drink again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 7:33 AM
This poem is excellent food for thought for those young ones who are eagerly looking forward to start 'socializing'! Been there once, but never again!! A small glass of red wine is ample for me! Regards ... paul
Laurie Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Hello Paul … it takes a long time for some to learn Paul. Thank God I have no desire to ever get into that state again. Water is my first choice now followed by tea - thank you Paul - Lindsay
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May 28, 2019 at 1:11 AM
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Laurie Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Thank you Panagiota … it hasn't struck me yet, but I'll keep an eye out for it - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 5:00 AM
Hang overs are the worst. You want to die but you know you won't. I've only suffered a few in my youth but you learn quickly that it's not worth the suffering. I could feel the pain and sickness you were describing. An excellent reminder for anyone who has over imbibed not to be foolish enough to do it again. : )
Laurie Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 8:20 PM
Hello Connie … like you I haven't suffered from a hangover since when but the reminder of the suffering remains tattooed on my brain. If we ate a food that had the same effect, we would never eat it again, yet many never learn - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Babcock Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Not much of a drinker myself and have never suffered from a hangover. Like the occasional wine or cocktail drink but not beer. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Hello Phyllis … that's very wise Phyllis. In my younger days I refused to learn, but never no more. The memory is now tattooed on my mind - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 4:46 PM
In reply to your comment below, I really don't get it! I drank beer once in my life and it was so nasty, it was not worth the "buzz" I got. I have tried wine since then but never got drunk on it. Wine is lovely!
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:52 PM
G'day Andrea … one word of advice Andrea for overindulgence … DON'T. The experience of getting drunk is horrible. I too enjoy red wine but only a small amount, so I've joined your club - catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Hi Lindsay, most people have had such an experience, enjoy half a glass of wine which is my tolerance. Well penned my friend! Hugs, Jennifer
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:23 AM
Hello Jennifer … just one experience should be enough to become the cure for a lifetime. Thanks for reading one again Jennifer - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Been there done that!
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:19 AM
G'day Timothy … how many lessons does it take to realize what's causing the massive headaches. Some never or want to learn - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Romios Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Miserable and not worth a minute of pain. Have had too many years ago... Enough. Not any more, Panagiota
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:17 AM
G'day Panagioto … the worst feeling in the world but still the drinker goes back for more. Crazy - thanks for commenting - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 6:45 PM
oh that last line, "im never going to drink again" Yeah, that's what they all say!! Great humor, LIndsay. I am not a drinker so I can't relate but I sure do love the taste of sweet wine.
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:15 AM
Hello Andrea … it's funny isn't it. If we ate something and it made us ill we wouldn't eat it again, so why is it different with alcohol. Thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Fortunately for you, monks with nothing better to do invented a concoction that will save your soul and day. It is called, "Fernet-Branca" and sold about everywhere in France and Italy. My late wife needed only to sniff it to get the cure! Now the election is over, you may need more than one bottle! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:12 AM
G'day Rico … the absolute cure is … abstain. The election nearly drove me back to drink but thank God it's over - catch you soon Rico - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 2:21 AM
ha ha ha been there once like that in my youth but now I rarely drink alcohol lol:-) true story - my doc asked me how many units of alcohol I drink - I said about 25 - his eyebrows almost hit the ceiling until I added ... in a year lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:09 AM
Hello Jan … doctors love to hear jokes like yours … yeah right! I rarely drink alcohol now. Been stung too many times - thank you Jan - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 12:33 AM
We've all been there, we never learn lol
Laurie Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 2:07 AM
G'day Tom … it feels like a sledgehammer is involved next morning - thanks Tom - Lindsay
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