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Haiku Harvest

HAIKU HARVEST picnic table bare ground cover heavy with leaves a flash of jay blue leaves turned brown heaven of twigs sassy squirrel digging house eaves in shadow blue sky poking through sparrows all puffed up late november cardinal like bloody spot post halloween scarecrow in tatters candy wrappers

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Jack Horne

Date: 12/2/2011 2:59:00 PM

I love these clever haiku, Daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2011 4:03:00 PM

Very descriptive work indeed..Enjoyed reading this eve..I don't know how I had missed it..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/1/2011 11:49:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your haik'i ha ha:) lots of great discriptions Daver..!

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/25/2011 11:22:00 AM

A good post season haiku, sir. Vivid!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/25/2011 8:22:00 AM

These are awesome, daver. love the second one. harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:43:00 AM

NICE DAVER, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2011 8:10:00 PM

interesting vignettes into the end of a season! i really enjoyed them, and how they are mostly nature based. I saw them come in from PFT but knew it would do no good to comment to you from my hotmail account. Can't you have someone test my account and see if you had it blocked by accident?

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/22/2011 5:21:00 PM

Tis a harvest indeed, each one a treasure to read; Your splendid mind is for all to find and I love to see where you lead. Can't pick a favorite, they are all so special! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/22/2011 1:08:00 PM

Remarkable poem, Daver. I can see the flash of the blue jay among the leaves and like the way you describe the cardinal as a "bloody spot" amidst the fall scenery. Right now I'm feeling like a "post halloween scarecrow in tatters." LOL But what can we do about the candy wrappers tricker-or-treaters leave behind? Smile and pick them up. Delightful, Daver! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving with your family. Love and blessings, Carolyn