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Haiku Gate

A buffeting wind gate grunts on rusty hinges ~ old man snores away.

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Date: 11/29/2014 5:51:00 PM
Grunts and snores . . . sounds of fall afternoon -- maybe too much turkey!!
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Michael Newman
Date: 11/30/2014 12:31:00 PM
Thanks David .ps Did you pick up on the change In "Lace " poem we spoke about.? Don't eat too much ! miken

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