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Haiku 002

the clement moon peeps above the moor top skyline... rooster productive. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Holly Moore

Date: 12/27/2012 4:50:00 AM

Very clever..but I think I would like to keep sleeping....Thanks for your comments..Hugs, Holly

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2012 5:49:00 PM

a nice image, a good feeling inspiring the old. waiting to see what the rooster has to say... ready or not... wake-yy wake-yy... love the image Harry... one of the best haiku' I've read all week... always~ PD

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/24/2012 8:17:00 AM

"clement moon"-- that alone made me smile, just loved the sound of it...then I read the next two lines-- made me smile all the more. This just came across as so scenic for me. Makes me also think of our Dawn masses here-- Misa de Gallo--Mass of the Roosters- is what we sometimes call it-- Merry Christmas hugs to you and your loved ones, Harry! Thank you smiles to you!

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/24/2012 3:51:00 AM

Merry Christmas Harry. Got a chuckle from the last line of your Haiku. Keep up the good work.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2012 3:42:00 AM

Very good haiku, Harry. - MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! Christmas Hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/24/2012 1:57:00 AM

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/23/2012 11:43:00 PM

From this Yorkshire Lass to a special Yorkshire lad, love your dry wit, the evidence being here. All the best harry and I am sure you will have a fantastic New Year xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/23/2012 9:22:00 PM

I just want to wish you a very merry Christmas my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2012 5:49:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..May your Christmas be a great one...Sara

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/23/2012 4:46:00 PM

Lol, I like "rooster productive". Too funny, Harry.

Rollo West

Date: 12/23/2012 4:11:00 PM

Hi Harry, really enjoyed your Haiku, what a great write my friend. Rollo

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/23/2012 3:50:00 PM

Harry...where'S my prize?...first here!What a gorgeous tangerine scene. I really enjoyed reading your work over the past yr and I look forward to more in 2013!! Luv and blessings, gwendolen