Gun Law

The wily fox found a gun,
Laying on the ground.
The curious fox picked it up,
Not realising what he had found.
He fiddled with the firearm
And came across the trigger,
He cocked the gun, and it went oiff,
Which made the old fox s.
Then suddenly, out of the bush,
A poacher popped his head.
This wily old fox was quick,
And shot the poacher dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:32 AM
I love it when the animal wins!
Hawkins Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Me too.
Fenn Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Woohoo! Hats of to the fox! Love this!
Hawkins Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, for your kind comment Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 6:24 PM
Hello Shirley ... the wily old fox would be thinking of karma I reckon - thank you Shirley - Lindsay
Hawkins Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 4:52 PM
I do too.
Omar Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 11:30 PM
Lucky fox and miserable poacher. Well put into words. Salute
Hawkins Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 6:17 PM
Thank you, Mohamed. Perhaps the gun the fox found was the poachers. Poetic Justice... Take care... Shirley
Hankins Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 7:23 PM
(chuckle) I loved "fiddled with the firearm." Too much of that these days, I'm afraid. Loved your poem, Shirley.
Hawkins Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 6:36 PM
I am so pleased it made you laugh, I don't think the poacher would have been very amused, do you? Thank you for your welcome comment.
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