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The wily fox found a gun, Laying on the ground. The curious fox picked it up, Not realising what he had found. He fiddled with the firearm And came across the trigger, He cocked the gun, and it went oiff, Which made the old fox s. Then suddenly, out of the bush, A poacher popped his head. This wily old fox was quick, And shot the poacher dead.

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Date: 9/7/2021 3:32:00 AM
I love it when the animal wins!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2021 8:27:00 PM
Me too.
Date: 9/3/2021 9:32:00 PM
Woohoo! Hats of to the fox! Love this!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2021 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, for your kind comment Jennifer.
Date: 8/30/2021 6:24:00 PM
Hello Shirley ... the wily old fox would be thinking of karma I reckon - thank you Shirley - Lindsay
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/5/2021 4:52:00 PM
I do too.
Date: 8/26/2021 11:30:00 PM
Lucky fox and miserable poacher. Well put into words. Salute
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 8/27/2021 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Mohamed. Perhaps the gun the fox found was the poachers. Poetic Justice... Take care... Shirley
Date: 8/26/2021 7:23:00 PM
(chuckle) I loved "fiddled with the firearm." Too much of that these days, I'm afraid. Loved your poem, Shirley.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 8/27/2021 6:36:00 PM
I am so pleased it made you laugh, I don't think the poacher would have been very amused, do you? Thank you for your welcome comment.

Book: Shattered Sighs