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Green Vision

In dream I saw a shooting star. 
It scorched a purple crusted sky 
Between the moon and rising sun  
Where an ambitious wish could fly. 
 
Pale plunging tail to distant views  
An auspicious sombre trail.
Inviting hope for seeking souls 
Hinting solemn quests, 
Yet to fail. 
 
Adjoining was a moody sea 
Spacious waves, so synchronised 
Pounamu tinged in stirring sand  
Tainted truths, in sophisticated lies. 
 
On land I see opposing peaks  
Each splitting views of common ground 
Defending sight from unseen flanks  
Staunch guardians rising to confound. 
 
Next soaring albino kereru  
Flying in swirling koru paths 
A karearea strikes one down  
Leaving repugnant aftermath. 
 
Suddenly the sun is blacked  
In silent roar
Concrete jungles on the rise 
Foundations built on measured thought 
In new clothes
Green emperors look surprised.

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Date: 9/3/2022 8:03:00 PM
Enjoyed your poetry this evening, dear poet.
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