Good-Bye World

The blood is leaking Dripping from my broken Heart I embrace LENORE

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/8/2012 6:52:00 PM

Wow. Such a powerful haiku, bleeding out the pure essence of undying love. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 6:27:00 PM

She is your muse, HG. Look at all the poetry she inspired.

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/14/2009 5:49:00 PM

beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2009 10:12:00 AM

Oh Hg I am missing you so much. I hope you get that computer fixed or get a new one soon. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/16/2009 5:23:00 AM

Powerful lines HG, I hope all is well. I haven't heard from you in a while...Raul

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/11/2009 7:54:00 AM

that is so good hgarvey!.................danielle

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/24/2008 9:45:00 AM

Awh HGarvey this is very sad and I'm sorry, Broken heart is something I personally don't deal with to well at all - Hope you handle it better than me - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ