Good-Bye, 2018

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Another year is drawing to a close.
			I sit alone reflecting on the life
			I've loved and cherished for these many days
			recalling every cause of joy and strife.

			I think of all those walks I take near home
			and thank God for the strength to walk each mile.
			I praise Him for the town in which I live,
			where I feel safe and neighbors wave and smile.

			My friends and loved ones occupy my mind.
			How little time I've spent with them! I vow
			in two thousand nineteen, I'll see them more.
			If I rely on Him, He'll show me how.

			Reviewing conflicts of the waning year,
			I think of how I sometimes played a part
			in making matters worse. I cannot push
			aside those thoughts that plague my troubled heart.

			I have to ask forgiveness, for I know
			it's my responsibility to be
			promoter of good will with everyone.
			Beginning now, I’ll strive for harmony.

			My reminiscing would be incomplete
			if I gave my church family no praise.		
			Next year, I still will be with them each week.
			They are a blessing in so many ways.

			To name each blessing of the year, I'd need
			a ream of paper and a quart of ink.
			I'd need to talk for days on end, but God
			knows how I feel and everything I think.

			Two thousand eighteen soon will breath its last
			as I am thanking God for joy and health,
			for all the seasons, and for giving me 
			more than I need--in my opinion, wealth.


Date: December 20, 2018	

Contest Title: Soon It Will Be 2019		
			
Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/9/2019 5:26:00 PM
Hello Janice, I also asked God for a blessed New Year. For good things to come my way for friends and families. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/9/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene! Janice
Date: 1/6/2019 12:29:00 AM
Your faith shines so brightly in this poem, Janice. A beautiful window into the heart and mind of a believer. The next to last verse is my favorite. happy new year!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/6/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much. P.S.! Janice
Date: 12/22/2018 6:13:00 PM
This is just lovely, Janice, and packed with wisdom, beauty, and the things that make life worth living - must fav this! This has literally been the worst year of my life, and yet I can still look back and be SO thankful for many blessings and opportunities ... just to be ALIVE sometimes is enough, for there will always be challenge and heartache, but it's what we choose to FOCUS on that matters, and you have stated that so beautifully here ... be VERY proud of this one. Blessings, Friend!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/22/2018 7:49:00 PM
Greg, your wonderful, kind message has made my night. I hope you have a merry Christmas and a great new year. You are a FINE poet!! Janice
Date: 12/22/2018 12:48:00 AM
This is such a heartwarming awesome rhyming farewell to the year soon ending wowwww. You rhymed superbly . I was admiring the creativity as well. Kudos. Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/22/2018 7:51:00 PM
You are SO kind. I love this comment. I'm going to read your latest poem right now! Janice
Date: 12/21/2018 6:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful reflective poem...thank full of the past and hope full of the future. Much grace and gratitude in your words. Best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/21/2018 7:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
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