fortress

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the crumbling of...

fortress 
. 
he built a fortress with his hands 
then climbed behind its walls, 
and shouted to those in command 
“you better run before it falls!” 
 . 
he played alone amongst the stones 
of false security, 
and when the fortress tumbled down 
the people came to see.   
.
they chopped the wood 
and rolled the stones 
that formed a bundled mess 
. 
and when they got the fortress cleared 
they stared in real distress. 
. 
for there they found no body 
stretched beneath the rubbish heap, 
but only a book that told of fools 
who cleared a man’s debris 
.
© tolbert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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