For My Sister

I see a Santa Fe upon its rail;
It deviates not to the left nor right, 
Nor hills, nor miles, nor weather can prevail
Upon its constant task come day or night. 
I see a Christian running the long race
Who never shirks the hard work to be done,
In spite of tribulations she must face,
Blesséd is she to glorify God’s Son. 
I see a faithful mother, wife, and daughter
Who brings to mind these Scriptures I now read:
“Go in my name and give cold cups of water,
Extending to the needy a kind deed.”
For one whose deeds upon good deeds get blurred
I think that ‘saint’ is not too high a word. 

[In the U.S, 'Santa Fe' is a well-known railway. The words translate to 'holy faith']

Written in 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........
Kauffman Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 9:46 AM
What a beautiful tribute and gift John! So wonderful to see it on the winners list - definitely a home run with the bases loaded! Your poetic expression is just superb and we are blessed by your words of "holy faith." Congratulations and high fives. Sending you joy for the new year dear friend! So wonderful to have you and your words back in the soup - warm, inspiring and comforting.
Agustin Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:29 PM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this "be-attitude of the heart." God bless you. A blessed New Year to your and your family.
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:50 PM
John, because you made her Christ-like character THE centerpiece of this sonnet, I think this could be a great entry for the contest you want to enter. It truly is one of your best written sonnets, and it is one I had seen before. The part that is an actual quote from the Bible, I think you would not begin the second quoted line with quotes since it's a continuation of the line before it.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 4:21 PM
What a fantastic tribute to your sister. Wow, she sounds so amazing, John. I like how you did not get spooked about using 11 syllables in the daughter line. The few Shakespere sonnets I have read, I noticed he sometimes went with 9 syllables or up to 11. I don't like when people say we must be restricted always to ten!!
Watt Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Thank you for the vote of confidence, Andrea. I have been "corrected" a couple of times for the 11 syllable lines in sonnets, but my reply (to quote Shakespeare) "tough twinkies"!
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