For Delores

Not given to shades bolder
Opting to render her view
In the softest of pastel

Soft voiced soft hued
though iron clad willed
brush stroke gentle to canvas as well

Unable to see the unseemly side
The gauche  vain
Indelicate sight

I wanted  so to be like her
Failing miserably
try as I might

Keep your eye simple
Incorporated no
Cemented into her heart

Filtered once was filter enough
A glance
Needed just a start

 The exit road to
Perdition
A way she fully dismissed

As an errant child sent to their room
to rue 
the way remissed

Her eye sight beginning
 to fail her now
Lenses covered in dust

Her vision yet still as
Clear as  new day as
to where to put her trust

This I learned from my sister
A delicate flower
A force

To be reckoned with
As she made her point
Without ever raising her voice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/18/2022 10:21:00 AM
What a sweet tribute, Vickey.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/18/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Jim for stopping in and your kind remark that made me grin.
Date: 9/15/2022 8:04:00 PM
An amazing dedication, truly beautiful to read. Harry
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/15/2022 8:37:00 PM
Oh you are so sweet .Thank you Harry.
Date: 9/15/2022 7:22:00 PM
She is still gracing our lives .I take her once a month to get shots in her eye.She is the oldest in the family and loved and respected by all. Thanks for meeting her acquaintance Gershon.
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Date: 9/15/2022 6:49:00 PM
Sounds as if Delores went back to be amongst the angels from whom she descended... Now dwelling in a much better place...
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Date: 9/15/2022 5:09:00 PM
Vickey, Wonderful Storyline in this one enjoyed reading...
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/15/2022 7:24:00 PM
Thanks for reading and thanks for your lovely comment Michael.
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