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For Delores

Not given to shades bolder Opting to render her view In the softest of pastel Soft voiced soft hued though iron clad willed brush stroke gentle to canvas as well Unable to see the unseemly side The gauche vain Indelicate sight I wanted so to be like her Failing miserably try as I might Keep your eye simple Incorporated no Cemented into her heart Filtered once was filter enough A glance Needed just a start The exit road to Perdition A way she fully dismissed As an errant child sent to their room to rue the way remissed Her eye sight beginning to fail her now Lenses covered in dust Her vision yet still as Clear as new day as to where to put her trust This I learned from my sister A delicate flower A force To be reckoned with As she made her point Without ever raising her voice

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Date: 9/18/2022 10:21:00 AM
What a sweet tribute, Vickey.
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/18/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Jim for stopping in and your kind remark that made me grin.
Date: 9/15/2022 8:04:00 PM
An amazing dedication, truly beautiful to read. Harry
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/15/2022 8:37:00 PM
Oh you are so sweet .Thank you Harry.
Date: 9/15/2022 7:22:00 PM
She is still gracing our lives .I take her once a month to get shots in her eye.She is the oldest in the family and loved and respected by all. Thanks for meeting her acquaintance Gershon.
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Date: 9/15/2022 6:49:00 PM
Sounds as if Delores went back to be amongst the angels from whom she descended... Now dwelling in a much better place...
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Date: 9/15/2022 5:09:00 PM
Vickey, Wonderful Storyline in this one enjoyed reading...
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Vickey Rhymer
Date: 9/15/2022 7:24:00 PM
Thanks for reading and thanks for your lovely comment Michael.

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