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5/5/2025 for Into The Hexaline Groove Poetry Contest

excited dad and son jazzed for vacation fun drive up the winding road see nature's grace bestowed finding dreams and desire burned by forest fire

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/6/2025 5:25:00 AM

Hello David, I think you captured that electric mix of excitement and the raw reality of nature’s power. Oh that tender balance between dreams and the scars that shape us. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

David Crandall
Date: 5/6/2025 4:06:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, you definitely have a talent for writing!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/5/2025 8:15:00 PM

O U C H. Only Smokey the Bear can prevent forest fires --- and he eloped with Yogi Bear a decade ago, when they finally 'came out.' ~ Barely Bearable

David Crandall
Date: 5/5/2025 9:25:00 PM

Smokey was off duty, but the fire department was there to tell us to turn around and go back down the hill. So, I went 180 degrees around the mountain, only to find the road blocked on the other side. Yet, our destination, Idyllwild, emerged unscathed, but we never got there.