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Flame Exchange (Naga-Uta Lyric)

Winter chills my bones
But you warm me to the core
Hold me tightly then
Burn me; fire me up tonight
As fire emits love 
You are the source of the flame
For eternity
You’ll be the fire in my heart
And I’ll be the fire in yours

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Adell Foster

Date: 9/21/2008 4:00:00 AM

A very lovely exchange of passion indeed my friend, Congratulations Michael on a well deserved win... :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/19/2008 3:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Michael! This poem is sizzlin'! Excellent! Love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/18/2008 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations Michael on your Third Place win in Brian's contest! Steamy hot. Well done! Love, Shar

Date: 9/18/2008 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations Michael on your third place finish in Brian's Naga-Uta contest. Way to go!! This is a timely piece with winter approaching. Hope your love keeps buring. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/30/2008 4:53:00 PM

Sounds like a fiery proposition. Good one. Regards Heidie

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/29/2008 7:48:00 AM

This is passion in the making! Very simmering poem, Michael!.....Carrie

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 8/29/2008 7:39:00 AM

lovely, as some find such truth in love...I like this form of poetry as you have written it excellently.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/29/2008 5:12:00 AM

Ouch - hot stuff, filled with the flames of love! Well done lyric, Michael, hot my poetic friend! Kristin