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Flame Exchange (Naga-Uta Lyric)

Winter chills my bones But you warm me to the core Hold me tightly then Burn me; fire me up tonight As fire emits love You are the source of the flame For eternity You’ll be the fire in my heart And I’ll be the fire in yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/21/2008 4:00:00 AM
A very lovely exchange of passion indeed my friend, Congratulations Michael on a well deserved win... :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 9/19/2008 3:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Michael! This poem is sizzlin'! Excellent! Love Kristin
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations Michael on your Third Place win in Brian's contest! Steamy hot. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/18/2008 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations Michael on your third place finish in Brian's Naga-Uta contest. Way to go!! This is a timely piece with winter approaching. Hope your love keeps buring. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/30/2008 4:53:00 PM
Sounds like a fiery proposition. Good one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/29/2008 7:48:00 AM
This is passion in the making! Very simmering poem, Michael!.....Carrie
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Date: 8/29/2008 7:39:00 AM
lovely, as some find such truth in love...I like this form of poetry as you have written it excellently.
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Date: 8/29/2008 5:12:00 AM
Ouch - hot stuff, filled with the flames of love! Well done lyric, Michael, hot my poetic friend! Kristin
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