Fall Ing

Carbohydrates, caffeine and chocolate Crave, create and crash The season of darkness upon us Time for a hundred yard dash To the food mart Fill up the cart With stimulants and cheer Same old story, same solution Just a different year

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Pat Adams

Date: 10/28/2017 6:29:00 PM

Love it! Very easy to relate. Like Waylon used to sing, "Climbing a ladder that leads to a hole in the ground!" Well written my friend..........80).....Patrick

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/29/2017 6:31:00 PM

And Willie sang, "Digging a hole to get to the top?" just kidding thanks for stopping by amigo!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/28/2017 2:28:00 PM

Oh so you have to wait until the dark times so that is why I put on some pounds. Well just have to put up with dark times with other outlets wooohooo.

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/29/2017 6:27:00 PM

Season is open year 'round, especially in the frozen north:-)

John Gondolf

Date: 10/28/2017 9:59:00 AM

Guilty, as charged...hahaha

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/29/2017 6:27:00 PM

yeah, but it's choc'lit!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2017 2:40:00 PM

will folk never learn John!! :-) I've still got chox from LAST christmas and a huge box of shortbread and a Christmas cake - hubbies diabetes has made us change our diet somewhat and son not being at home means they don't get opened!! :-) :-(:-( hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/28/2017 8:22:00 AM

Seems like I write something about the season of darkness every year, but I'm way more cheerful about it than I used to be — plus, I eat way less choc'lit. Spose there's a connection? :-) Cheerios and froot loops! (plus hugs, of course) ~ j

Tim Smith

Date: 10/27/2017 10:18:00 AM

Put on an extra layer...pay off the payer...go back home and crash

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/28/2017 8:15:00 AM

:-) Can I skip the pay'r part?

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/27/2017 9:29:00 AM

Ah, smart pen :) enjoyed! xomo

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/28/2017 8:15:00 AM

Pen says you get a a nummers Bernard Callebaut choc'lit for being so nice;-)