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Exaggerates Gauzy

The sun cast bright golden yellow Through the boughs of tall trees Exaggerates gauzy light fog Wrapping like swarming bees The grass freshly mowed lies in clumps Upon the dew laden Ground, soon it won't have to be cut By Ginko leaves hidden The beams of light filter through fog Magical its soft glow Soon the magic will be gone; heat From the sun will flow

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/27/2012 11:17:00 AM

yes still very hot.....but the grandson does not cut grass as professionally as he should. dad made me rake and sweep if I made a pile of mulch clippings.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2012 8:03:00 PM

hi, Sara. this is a very wonderful write. i love it and really enjoyed reading it. thank you so much for dropping by and you kind comments on my poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 6:13:00 PM

Sara, hi,,, thank you for stopping by my poem.. your poem is magic right out of a magicians hat.... love your poem.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2012 12:54:00 PM

beautiful write, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/26/2012 12:10:00 PM

What a beautiful, simply beautiful write my friend! I truly loved every breathtaking line, especially about the wondrous fog you mentioned! You have impressed me with the flow of the poem, I was delighted to read with such grace! You have written a masterful piece Sara, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 10:41:00 AM

great imagery that gauzy light fog wrapping like swarming bees, sara. Was it deliberate that you changed from italics to regular font in the last stanza?

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 8/26/2012 9:34:00 AM

A beautiful write full of the beautiful change of seasons. Lay

Anne Rutherford

Date: 8/26/2012 9:09:00 AM

Beautiful Sara , last stanza is magnificent . Well written Poetry. Anne