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Emptiness

Fake smiles bring up joy,
Hiding the pain and sadness.
Pretending (for THEM)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2014 4:28:00 PM
AUTUMN,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/14/2014 8:15:00 PM
Hi Autumn.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes like this one.. Come check me out!
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:26:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Autumn - I choose your first great and well written Haiku poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2014 7:27:00 PM
Autumn, I have always been the type that you see me and everything shows. I sometimes wish I was able to conceal my emotions. Good Haiku Blessings eve
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:21:00 PM
Think we can all hide behind a smile so no one knows what pain we are hiding - I can relate to this write:-( great poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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