early morning walk

with cat eyes I see thick darkness surrounding me streetlights are a fog

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2024 4:02:00 PM

This is such a cool ku!

Karen Croft
Date: 10/21/2024 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/21/2024 9:54:00 AM

I love cats- you described their eyes very uniquely

Karen Croft
Date: 10/21/2024 7:04:00 PM

Thank you! And thanks for reading!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/21/2024 8:56:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Early morning is a great time of the day. Have a wonderful Autumn day......................

Karen Croft
Date: 10/21/2024 8:57:00 AM

Thank you for reading, I'm trying to get back in the swing of walking again after knee repair surgery!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/21/2024 4:44:00 AM

May you always look into your cat eyes and see the colors of love and beauty, let the fog settle on the lake, and talk a walk in the sunshine dear poetess, love your words, they are amazing !

Karen Croft
Date: 10/21/2024 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for reading, enjoy your day writing;-)