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Dwelling In Darkness

The scattered dreams without a goal The shattered seams within my soul I ever vow to spark in hell Forever now in darkness dwell What mattered most I turned away A clattered ghost I spurned what may Ever versed to endear the night Forever cursed to fear the light

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/26/2024 9:39:00 AM

Hello Randy, your poem evokes such a profound sense of introspection and inner turmoil. The imagery of scattered dreams and shattered seams poignantly portrays the struggle with uncertainty and regret. I liked how your words convey a haunting resonance, reflecting the perpetual cycle of seeking peace in darkness while yearning for the light. What a powerful exploration of the human experience and the complexities of confronting one's own demons. - Blessings, Daniel

Randy Freie
Date: 3/26/2024 11:16:00 PM

Thanks Daniel, your continued support inspires me to put pen to paper. Take care brother.