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Dreamy Mood of a Muse

Dress my dreams agleam your soft sterling tiffany on chiffon cream moonbeams fly your mused rapture. In glimmers so shimmers swooned stream’s epiphany of silky words cashmere.. dream’s cocoon.. you capture. Susan Ashley October 3, 2020 N/A Stanza from: With Finespun Fingers; November 24, 2017 Contest: Rithimus Divisa 8 Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/15/2020 8:11:00 AM

You capture this mood with delightful silky poetic words, Susan. This will certainly make the winners' list! Warm regards & hugs, my friend // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/15/2020 8:55:00 AM

Dear Paul, I'm so sad to say that this verse which comes from the poem written in dedication to you "With Finespun Fingers" was, unfortunately, NA'd :( But, this poem still ranks among my very most favorite pieces I've ever had the pleasure of inspiration to compose. Thank you, my wonderful friend, for your gracious visit and beautiful comments. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2020 11:15:00 AM

- Really dreamy and beautiful, Susan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/6/2020 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your heartwarming comments are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/6/2020 10:47:00 AM

You certainly finespun this poem Susan. In just 4 lines the silky words of cashmere the moonbeams of cream chiffon - this is a masterpiece my friend and deserves a POTD or month. Beautiful Susan, awesome! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/6/2020 4:44:00 PM

Jennifer, the beauty of your heartfelt comments touch me deeply. Your lovely thoughts grace my heart and poem with the kindness and light of your wonderful friendship. Thank you, dear poetess. I’m so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes, dear friend.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/4/2020 4:30:00 PM

Certainly a deep and wonderful composed expression of silken words cast by a master poet that sings from an enchanted castle.. God bless.. A fav..

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2020 6:38:00 PM

Ah, my wonderful friend, how great it is to see you here. Your inspiring poetic spirit has been sorely missed, Robert. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me. I value your thoughts more than you can imagine and I am heartened by your gracious visit. The honor of your fav is deeply appreciated, my dear friend. Warmest wishes to you and yours.. ~Susan

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/4/2020 1:46:00 AM

Perfectly overwhelming Susan. This is amazing.and more than fine spun! Pangie xx

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2020 6:23:00 PM

Pangie, I relish your wonderful response to my poem. I'm perfectly overwhelmed by the beauty of your comments.. they hearten my heart and inspire me to continue to reach ever higher. Thank you, my dear friend, for your gracious encouragement. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Watt

Date: 10/3/2020 9:20:00 PM

Susan, your muse seems to have been in a rapturous mood when you wrote this soaring symphony of shimmering silk! You have taken what feels like 12 lines of regular poetry and distilled into a brilliantly balanced and composed jewel. I love you magnificent rhymes, your alliterations in line 3, and the dreamy artistry of everything. A winner to me, and if I know Greg, he will love it to. Now off to see the original. Poetic smiles, my dear friend!

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2020 6:32:00 PM

The depth and breadth of the rich critique you bestow upon my poem takes my breath away, and is appreciated more than you can imagine, John. I'm elated by your response and inspired to reach ever higher in my artistic expression. Thank you sharing your generous kindness with me, my wonderful friend. You're truly a tough act to follow in Greg's contests, that's for sure, dear poet.. I'll meet you at the original poem :)) Warmest wishes and poetic smiles to you, John.. ~Susan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/3/2020 12:21:00 PM

Beautifully composed four lines Susan, a verse that can stand on its own. Best of luck in the contest, hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 4:21:00 PM

Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments, Tom. My weekend is going well and I hope yours is too, my friend :)) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Woodrow

Date: 10/3/2020 11:46:00 AM

oh I really love the first and last lines...now I must be off to read the rest of the poem...It will be a nice revisit for me :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 4:27:00 PM

Thank you, stunning Susan numero uno, for your wonderful comments :)) I’m glad to know you will revisit the original poem.. I appreciate that, my friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Silent One

Date: 10/3/2020 10:56:00 AM

That's one creative muse... It's dreamy mature sure brings your poetic brilliance out...Four great lines

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:00:00 AM

Thank you for being the first to leave such kind encouragement, Silent One. Your thoughtful comments are treasured always, my dear friend. I need to catch up with your poetic beauties very soon. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan