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Please ... Waste no spin on my heart's needs Pay no thought for how it bleeds Expend no mind, its ebbing beat What's left is puddled at your feet Just dip your fingers - find a wall And make goodbye ... A bloody scrawl.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2018 12:38:00 PM

A most pleasant read, Gregory. Well done.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:41:00 PM

Very kind of youy, Line - thank you, my friend! :-)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/10/2018 6:51:00 AM

Oh yeah, potent packed little pen! Fantastic ink my dear friend. xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mo, was hoping you'd like this one! :-)

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2018 5:03:00 AM

Very deep and very sad Greg...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, S1 - much appreciated.