David's Moustache

“Why fit in when you were born to stand out?” 

David Brown, August 12, 2015

David had a moustache
It covered his lips
It grew and it grew
Till it reached to his hips

It flapped in the breeze
And it frightened small dogs
In the winter it would freeze
And in the summer catch frogs

His friend Juliet, well
She begged him to trim it
She said that his moustache
Had gone way past the limit

He hemmed and he hawed
And he dithered and dathered
But the moustache said 'No!
I will never be lathered!'

Juliet would not waver
She said 'It must go!'
‘It may have looked like your dad's,
but that was MANY years ago!’

The moustache, it quivered
It trembled and dropped
It knew Juliet was a woman
Who couldn't be stopped

It said 'Goodbye David
you will surely be missed,
but your lip must get naked
If you want to get kissed!’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 10:04 AM
No contest, the kiss wins out in the end. Clever and fun! Congrats.
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 1:03 PM
A double thank you, Richard. One for the kind comment and another for pointing me to the contest. Appreciate your support greatly
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Wonderful quote n a superb poem David! Congrats on first place win!
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so very much
Nance Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:50 PM
This was so much fun to read...the mustache reminded me of the Lorax...Thank you so much for entering my contest and Big congrats on top place..I do hope you try your pen at another Seuss poem for my next contest! :)
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Thank you so much for hosting and for your very kind words, Casarah.
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:23 PM
David, congrats in "Casarah Nance"s" contest... SKAT LOVE
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Thank you SKAT....always appreciate your kind words
Harding Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Dave had a lip that was covered with hair but Juliet just wasn't hip to hair there/.../ and since he dislikes liking things Julie doesn't, Dave had to shave it off just like it wasn't!/.../Ha! Congrats on your charming win! xoxo
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Thank you for the very funny and kind comments, Lycia.
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Wonderful poem, David, congratulations on your win, kisses from your better half is better and sweet than having a long mustache that comes to life a 7, Hugs Eve
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Thank you very much Eve, indeed - kisses from the missus are simply delicious...
Eastman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:42 AM
BRAVO! Congrats on the winning poem, And we're ever so glad we got to read... about David's mustache... Yes-siree'!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Carol, appreciate the very kind words
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:55 AM
ha ha ha love the humour many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thank you my friend, it was a nice surprise to be recognized.
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Haha...hilarious.... Tim
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 11:36 PM
Thanks Tim, glad you enjoyed it
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 6:38 PM
hahahaha hilarious prose :D well im like Juliet who doesn't want to be kissed with someone who has moustache.. :D :P
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 11:37 PM
Glad it made you smile
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