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Dark Temper

Crystalline marbles streaming; Pouring from clouds; rainstorm. Lightening flickers in the dark. Night brings the dark; Hides moonlight streams; Such rage, have storms. On the ocean waves, storms Show their tempers, dark; Angry waves leave streaming debris. A simple storm, without an angry, dark temper is preferable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/8/2019 9:49:00 PM
Oh I have not seen a tritina in so long. I can't even recall the rules but this is nice, so hopefully it is to form!! Do they even describe this form at Soup? Shall have to go have a peek!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/9/2019 6:50:00 AM
Oh yes, it's on there. Thanks so much.
Date: 1/7/2019 2:49:00 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser,there is a lot of action going on here. have a nice day my friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/7/2019 9:39:00 PM
We've had some bad storms here in the past...talk about action...Whew! Thanks, Darlene.
Date: 1/7/2019 11:50:00 AM
A tempestuous awareness aroused in this poem. a great write, Very well done. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/7/2019 12:22:00 PM
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

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