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crisp air, foggy mist surrounds red, orange, and red leaves.... dawn touches the earth

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Date: 11/10/2023 9:09:00 AM
The whole Haiku is taken in one single breath, Sara. I would wish that noon never reach me, my friend--cheers. Aloha, William
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, William. I enjoyed writing that one. Your visits add a new dimension. Sara K
Date: 10/27/2023 1:42:00 PM
Sara, The vivid imagery and evocative words paint a vivid picture of the season's vibrant colors, crisp air, and serene atmosphere. It is truly a work of art, showcasing your profound talent and deep understanding of the Haiku form.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/27/2023 2:34:00 PM
I appreciate the high praise, Lasaad. Your visits always add a special note. Sara K
Date: 10/27/2023 9:13:00 AM
simply beautiful poem Sara "dawn touches the earth" lovely hugs Shadow
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/27/2023 2:33:00 PM
Why, thank you, Shadow. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 10/26/2023 7:16:00 PM
This picture should be engraved with this poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/27/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, TS. I liked that picture as well. Seems like such a serene place to be and have an apple orchard. Your visit add a special dimension to my page. Sara K
Date: 10/26/2023 2:04:00 PM
Delightful Sara, well done!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2023 3:29:00 PM
Mark, I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 10/26/2023 12:02:00 PM
Dawn “brushes” the earth. =]
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2023 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Chris Con for the smiley face that is so unique. Sara K
Date: 10/26/2023 11:27:00 AM
Sara, this haiku is as beautiful as autumn itself. Love "dawn touches earth." I hope this is for a contest. It is just lovely in its gentleness and eloquence. Autumn blessings of joy to you!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/26/2023 3:27:00 PM
Why, thank you, Sam. Not for a contest, just writing to make me happy. Your visit has added so much joy to my life. Sara K

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