Crack Kills

Crack Kills Crack and Pill went up the hill to fetch a pail of slaughter, Crack fell left, Pill just slipped face first in muddy water. Crack smokes pipes, Pills a hype, someone's perfect daughter, when they reached the top there's a pop, pop, pop, yah Crack he shot her. He needed the money... 01/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Meeker Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 1:47 AM
This is one of my favorites. I love the darkness of it.
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:19 PM
It bothers me that people can get so very addicted to the substance and will do anything for it..
Davey Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Me and you alike
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 8:15 AM
It cracks one's future open, letting misery seep in.... Congrats Brian, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Brian, four lines of very powerful thoughts conveyed in this 'jack and jill' jingle...Very clever, but sadly so true. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:21 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Brian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Davey Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Thank you
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