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Crack Kills

Crack Kills Crack and Pill went up the hill to fetch a pail of slaughter, Crack fell left, Pill just slipped face first in muddy water. Crack smokes pipes, Pills a hype, someone's perfect daughter, when they reached the top there's a pop, pop, pop, yah Crack he shot her. He needed the money... 01/17/2016

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Date: 5/16/2018 1:47:00 AM
This is one of my favorites. I love the darkness of it.
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:19:00 PM
It bothers me that people can get so very addicted to the substance and will do anything for it..
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/15/2018 3:08:00 PM
Me and you alike
Date: 5/18/2016 8:15:00 AM
It cracks one's future open, letting misery seep in.... Congrats Brian, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:35:00 AM
Brian, four lines of very powerful thoughts conveyed in this 'jack and jill' jingle...Very clever, but sadly so true. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Brian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/15/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you