Come, Fall

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Placed 5th (out of ten) in Brian Strand's New Poem Contest 1238

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weather’s
trying

humid
hazy 

has me
sighing

feeling
lazy

temps not
dropping

sweat is
pooling

clothes are 
sopping

we crave
cooling

autumn’s 
coming

respite 
bringing

I’ll be
humming

praising
singing!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2023 4:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win ... great done, Janice :) - Autumn is here - hugs

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/28/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. I agree and it is supposed to be a little cooler this coming week here. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/27/2023 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sara. Our relief here in the South has come through a nice, slow rain. It will be nice for a few days! Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2023 6:44:00 AM

Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win with this lovely poem.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/27/2023 11:32:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lasaad. Janice

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 8/25/2023 12:16:00 AM

I like how you composed this :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/25/2023 6:11:00 AM

Thanks so much, Aysha! Janice

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/24/2023 11:58:00 AM

Janice, your writing is so beautifully crafted and truly brilliant. Your piece is truly excellent and captures the overwhelming exhaustion caused by the scorching heat.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/24/2023 2:26:00 PM

Lasaad, your kind words have made my day! Thanks a million. Janice