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Collaborating In the Clouds

~A Question To The Most High~ Why did you not wipe out Adam and Eve? And save us the trials that the evil conceive Why not start your creation anew Then all this pain and sorrow would be through. “I gave a perfect man and woman to fill the earth They threw the gift in my face as if nothing of worth Tempted away by one traitorous angelic son But to balance things out I sent my only begotten one.” Why may I inquire did things go so ill? “That’s because I gave them this thing called free will. One Angel up high wanted to take my place He tempted Adam and Eve by showing his face.” “He appeared as a snake and promised them all They were new inexperienced that was their downfall They did as the young do, never asked advice They were trapped by their actions in a grip like a vice.” But God may I ask why did you not act and remove them? You could have created a new couple and started again. “This devil, once angel, said man would love me for what I could give So to prove to the angelic realm I am God, I let them live…” “I can only prove by stepping aside and letting him try To turn man from me, I must watch and I must sigh. My only begotten son Jesus, I sent for a ransom To balance the perfect life Adam lost, and then some” “Note this, what I say, my son I did send on that auspicious day He is not God to whom so many pray. I am God the father, he is my son, You can only get to me by directing your prayers through this one” But God they keep telling us you are a trinity! “Don’t be foolish I am God alone and I am not three I have Holy Spirit, I can direct it where I will I have my first begotten son and my divine spirit still.” “I am God, God alone ruling heavens and the earth But I have stepped aside for a while, so the traitor can show his worth He is the cause, this one they call Devil and Satan He declared my plan for man, was bad and mistaken.” “So I am letting him try and before I step back in I will right all the wrong, and remove all the sin You will now leave this place and tell all earthling man Stay faithful and strong and to you do what you can. Faith the assured expectation of things not seen but will come Leave, Come no more, my Will, will be done.”
© ~GG~ 27/06/2012 For the contest "Collaboration In The clouds" sponsored by: PD

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Date: 11/10/2012 5:20:00 AM
God almighty this is good, i could go on and on.. each poem speaks volumes, of the writer..............
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:38:00 PM
A wonderful write Mandy, I enjoyed reading very much~ Caryl
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Date: 7/3/2012 6:42:00 AM
Mandy, I can't remember. Are you Mormon? Some of what you are saying, about the war in heaven, and the trinity in particular, is like our Mormon doctrine!
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:52:00 AM
good luck in contest
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Date: 6/30/2012 2:41:00 AM
Just splendid i have not seen such poetry for a while .
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Date: 6/29/2012 2:08:00 PM
Amen!
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:45:00 AM
Mandy this is a great conversation, good luck...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 5:44:00 PM
Epic write, enjoyed this read very much
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:31:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Good luck in PD's contest..Enjoyed reading your thoughts about your faith..Good faith based work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 6/28/2012 3:33:00 PM
Oh! Decaffeined coffee does have some caffeine even though it is decaf..Without that little bit in the morning I get a caffeine headache..Sara
Date: 6/28/2012 11:12:00 AM
Mandy this is awesome ,could be read in any church service . My son and I had a recent conversation about 'free will' a few days ago. Not that God condones wrong doings only that he gave us free will. Wonderful poem. Hugs Anne
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:43:00 PM
Well done, Mandy, interesting dialogue, Jag
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Date: 6/27/2012 6:59:00 PM
Mandy, very well written! Terry
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Date: 6/27/2012 4:12:00 PM
well written Mandy...a winner all the way...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 6/27/2012 11:34:00 AM
As everything revolves His will solve. Enjoyed reading the words you penned today. Peace and blessings to you.
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:05:00 AM
you wrote this under inspiration from the MOST HIGH,deep, spiritual,I heard GOD speaking through you,great write GG,gone to my fav,go get em in the contest
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