Collab With Shogun Series Richard Pickett Poetry Bill's Side Part 6 Team Up

After Bill got Brick’s emergency call about the new find under the Bywater bridge, he downed 
his coffee, shoved his files in a drawer, donned his 9mm w/shoulder holster,  traded his  
Stetson for a NYPD ball cap, made for the squad car, punched the blue lights and headed to 
Brick’s destination.
     When he approached the bridge , the bus was already there and Brick was talking to the 
driver. His car was parked slanted into the traffic slow lane so all had to slow and go around 
the scene. He already had it cordoned off with tape.
    Bill pulled up behind Brick’s squad car adding blue lights to his. Brick spotted Bill getting 
out of his car and motioned him over.  They both stepped towards each other after Brick 
finished his instructions to the bus driver. When Bill first got to NYC. He had no idea that 
the cops referred to the ambulance as the “bus” but it was just another colloquialism he had 
to pick up on after his stint in Texas. .and here it was on the scene again. It wasn’t usually 
a welcome site.
     Above the noise of the oncoming traffic, they shook hands heartily and Brick grinning, 
beat Bill to the punch saying “What the hell took you so long? You stop and kiss your horse 
good morning on the way over here or something?"
     “Nah, I just decided to take the scenic route. I figured you’d have this case all wrapped 
up by the time I got here. …How in the heck are ya, Brick. Seems like I ain’t  seen you since 
back before the Alamo.  What all this fuss about here? 
     “Well let me show you, cowboy.” Bill followed Brick to the blanket laid on the cracked 
pavement roadside in the shadow of the bridge. Even before he got there Bill could see 
blood oozed out from under the cover in a stilled puddle. Brick slowly pulled the blanket back 
to inspect the victim while looking up to Bill to catch his reaction. “ Whaddya  think?” 
     The grimace on Bill’s face said it all. He had seen a lot of carnage in his time but never 
anything quite like this. He caught his breath and let it out slowly and quietly whispering the 
words “ Holy  crap…. It’s a butcher job!... “
     
(continued on Richard Pickett poetry (Taz)

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Date: 12/16/2010 9:02:00 PM
The vivid imagery and the dialogue makes me feel part of the action.. I am really enjoying this Bob. Love Wilma
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:22:00 PM
ooh, that last part gets my interest there. sounds like you and Taz make quite a creative team! About Miracle Worker, it's the story of how Helen Keller finally understood how to "sign", and the meaning of words. thanks for your comments to my poems. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:15:00 PM
Good descriptive write..Sara
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Date: 12/14/2010 12:30:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words on my Christmas narrative, Rob. It had the intended impact on your wife. Hope she could see there was joy mixed with the pain of Lisa's loss. Your comments on that poem meant a lot to me. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2010 10:56:00 AM
Rob, this is such a great storyline. I left a note on one of Richard's poems telling him how much I am enjoying your collaboratiion series! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 1:21:00 PM
Aren't Police Detectives a special breed? You would have to be to deal with these realities every day. So many live, unaware of their efforts and hard work, unless we happen to catch the daily news or it's too close to home. Keep up this great writing as I'm enjoying it! Hope both families are doing well today. Love, audrey
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