Casting Spills

this puddle was
made from tears
nothing can live here

it's too toxic
made from 
something

said left
dead in
the water

don't bother
trying to save
the one who made

it for he is
saying and
making more

words for
to drown
himself in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/15/2019 8:46:00 PM
This is so bleak. Powerfully penned. xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/15/2019 9:37:00 PM
Thanks Maureen. This is what happens when I don't really hear from mi Musa all day. Sad I'm that addicted.
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