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Burnt Commands

In my soft rind light scars me blind to fumble lost. Invocations from crushed nations spew black exhaust at rogue titans while they frighten to sell all Hell made in China. Our angina compels farewell prayers from devout voices that shout prophetic words written by hand to singe doom's brand upon Earth's herds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2009 11:40:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup John. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 9:34:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen in this one. Keep the creative and informative pen flowing.l Sara
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