Brushes Of Fire

The dog days of summer bring humid air, that morphs into dewdrops, as the night cools. And summer swimsuits aren't seen anywhere: because the kids have returned to their schools; abandoning their sandcastles and pools. The leaves are slowly being drained of green, changing color as they prepare to die. And the cottage windows don't need a screen when the sun sits low in the Autumn's sky for there's no mosquitoes; just the odd fly. Nature paints the leaves with brushes of fire, while moonbeams gild cerise edges in gold. For Nature is an artist to admire: with a Fall palette that's subtle and bold; Her art is a masterpiece to behold. Exhaling a breath of air, crisp and cool, with a sweet, spicy scent that defines Fall; Autumn pulls a thread from Memory's spool. It is time for Jack Frost's infamous scrawl, welcoming Winter in her snow-white shawl. Brisk breezes rattle bare branches and twigs, as a forest of skeletons quivers. A squirrel stashes nuts in holes it digs: for the cold starts to give it the shivers, aware of the wrath Winter delivers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Back with more well deserve congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 1:02 AM
Extraordinarily beautiful write, Emile, I enjoyed it very much! Congrats on your well-earned win, my friend! :-)
Pinet Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Gregory, I am so pleased that you liked it enough to comment my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Thanks Line, you're a champ my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Ah...the coolness and beauty of fall. Stunning imagery Emile! "Sunlight paints the leaves with brushes of fire and moonbeams gild cerise edges in gold." Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win my friend! : )
Pinet Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you so much Connie, I truly appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Lindley Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 3:58 PM
To me this is a golden weaving of Nature, life , seasons and artistic poetic tapestry of color and inspiration. Such as can only be scribbed by a wondrous and gifted true poet's heart.. A fav..
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much Robert, I do so appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:11 PM
You've captured the transition from one season into another with rhythmic grace and stunning imagery, Emile. Your lush poetic lines are alive with breath, color, movement and the feeling of Autumn comes boldly into focus in your beautiful piece. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Pinet Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:46 PM
I think you made no errors (just saw what you wrote about looking for errors AFTER I read it). It's a lovely piece you wrote and you covered almost everything about the fall! wow five quintains stanzas. I don't think I will come up with that many!
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 5:49 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your encouraging comments my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Very lovely poem, Emile, about my favorite season and this is one of those poems that would be great to read aloud. FAVED *soupmail
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thanks again Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Lovely, lovely poem, Emile, and a FAV for sure. I love Fall/Autumn. *soupmail
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Awesome imagery, Emile. Well done.
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Some wonderful phraseology and images here! I so enjoyed reading your portrayal of this season. There are no mosquitoes, not There’s (singular) An artist Palettes
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Thanks Wendy, as always I appreciate your help my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 11:14 AM
You summed it up very well Emile.. Change is always upon us and you put it so poetically...
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:19 PM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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